Sleeping Valor

The trees swayed harmoniously in the channeled wind that crept around them, their shadows dancing lightly on the grass from the lanterns set around the large perimeter of the lake. ...

Welcome Roo! Cool name. =P And I salute you on having reached 8000 words. I wish I had that many words to one story. =P Someone recently linked which helps ...

Welcome! I like your avie, it sounds a lot like something I'd say. =P YWS is a great community, so I'm glad you found us. I see you've already gotten ...

The sunset drips over the hill, A blaze of red, orange and pink ,[I would remove this comma, since the setence would read 'A blaze or red, orange and pink ...

The words are escaping, [Get rid of the space here] They’re flying away. I can’t find the rhythm, Or what to say. They pound in my head, A discord of ...

Creeping, Fleeing .[Period instead of comma] All of them Seeing. Hiding, Catching, Some of them Snatching. Running, Quicker .[I'd put a period here] A shiver, A flicker. Stumble, Move on. ...

"Time for bed." Those three words I feared the most. My initial reaction was to think this might sound better as 'Those were the three words I feared the most'. ...

"Time for bed." Those three words I feared the most. My initial reaction was to think this might sound better as 'Those were the three words I feared the most'. ...

Welcome! YWS is a great community filled with lots of nice people. I haven't finished many stories myself, but I'm definitely more of a story writer than a poet. There ...

Welcome! (Or should I say welcome back?) I haven't been around in a while either, so I think i share you excitement about getting back into writing. ^_^ I won't ...

Welcome duckling! (Is that what you'd like to be called?) YWS is a great community and I'm sure you'll like it here. Just a heads up on some rules: 1) ...

*accepts muffins* ^_^ Welcome to YWS! I'm sure your sure your work is good, or at the very least has lots of potential. I myself like urban fantasy a lot, ...

I think everyone has their own way of starting. An important thing I like to keep in mind is that the chronological beginning is not always the 'beginning' of your ...

Bonjour! Welcome to YWS. I'm sure you're going to fit right in here at YWS, which is one of the best writing communities (the only one I would suggest to ...

^_^ L is quite cool. *points at her avie* I saw the first season (before it started playing on TV) but I spoiled the second season for myself by reading ...